tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post1026770551348983401..comments2007-03-11T15:14:32.385-05:00Vinny "Bond" Marinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-9917201920786286102007-02-20T17:27:00.000-06:002007-02-20T17:27:00.000-06:00Sly smoothie! He sounds like he's had plenty of practise.... <BR/><BR/>Hello Bond - hope you're well... Your writing's good. I enjoyed it.<BR/><BR/>See you late for next Monday's matinee no doubt!!TopChamphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03377737494575644509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-85636739601406524752007-02-20T06:42:00.000-06:002007-02-20T06:42:00.000-06:00Great story! At first, it looked to long to bother with, but as soon as I started reading, it held my attention all the way through!Waynehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05308447697581920397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-1168742545883176522007-02-20T05:07:00.000-06:002007-02-20T05:07:00.000-06:00Sorry I'm late but I wasn't able to read anything yesterday... (too much carnival-cocktails...) ;)<BR/><BR/>Thanks for this story and the wonderful music! <BR/>And of course I'm so so SO happy that you offered grilled chicken breast and diet coke!!! *YummY* <BR/><BR/>Big Hugs and Love,<BR/>SonnySweet Kittyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01778892196377217011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-43460919872406022382007-02-19T18:46:00.000-06:002007-02-19T18:46:00.000-06:00Vince - I throughly enjoyed this, both the story and the music! I met someone, a stranger, at a wedding once and it was instant attraction...we dated for several months. So this story brought back some happy memories for me...thanks!<BR/>HUGS!!!Sueannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07953220944362182174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-32624047642705195452007-02-19T18:40:00.000-06:002007-02-19T18:40:00.000-06:00Feel better SongbirdBondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-42958733234743097492007-02-19T18:14:00.000-06:002007-02-19T18:14:00.000-06:00Nicely detailed again, Vinny.<BR/><BR/>Sorry I'm not much for words today. I'm feeling horrible, and just thought I'd stop by for a quick read and comment.Desert Songbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14320552900816326120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-51107832272434248702007-02-19T16:10:00.000-06:002007-02-19T16:10:00.000-06:00TURN: thanks... i enjoyed this one...<BR/><BR/>ANGELL: That is my plan moving forward... enough for a quick hit without bogging it down<BR/><BR/>MORGEN: As soon as I saw the word, the scenario was in my head...HAPPY BIRTHDAY YOU YOUNG'UN<BR/><BR/>PEG: Thanks... and I watched all of you from the small stage as the DJ<BR/><BR/>TISHA: Blush dear...<BR/><BR/>MERI: This day and age they are not recommended fer sure...Bondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-80050094715562408922007-02-19T15:43:00.000-06:002007-02-19T15:43:00.000-06:00Veeeery interesting. Although I do wonder how people can have one night stands with perfect strangers! **Shudders at the thought** Call me a prude, if you want, but that just ain't right.Meribahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13744257308678493967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-67022384905202846622007-02-19T13:35:00.000-06:002007-02-19T13:35:00.000-06:00You're unfortgettable Bond baby!Tisha!http://www.blogger.com/profile/00476744443195395621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-55309265768252068162007-02-19T12:40:00.000-06:002007-02-19T12:40:00.000-06:00Good piece of writing, my friend!! Thanks! :D You really capture the scene in a very engaging way...God knows how many weddings in which I participated where I was a single bridesmaid!!Peghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12282315751565186831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-68458786888940221072007-02-19T11:04:00.001-06:002007-02-19T11:04:00.001-06:00Ah! Excellent use of "celebrate"!<BR/>I loved this installment of your matinée series.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the e-cards, they put a big smile on my face today!<BR/>cheers,<BR/>moMorgenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16654573008006116939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-79763030781759049432007-02-19T11:04:00.000-06:002007-02-19T11:04:00.000-06:00Love it Vince. I gotta agree with Turnbaby. You give enough to the audience so that we can get a clear picture of the night, and of the characters, but not overly descriptive....<BR/><BR/>Can't wait for next weeks...Angellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07752214549343627320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-60220251416140812502007-02-19T10:26:00.000-06:002007-02-19T10:26:00.000-06:00Nice job Bondbaby--just the right amount of detail--it flows well and you 'get' a good intial sketch of the 'Steve' character in a short period of time.<BR/><BR/>Well done.Turnbabyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02112548452165588580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-81814563221397961032007-02-19T09:37:00.000-06:002007-02-19T09:37:00.000-06:00MAGS: I know people who do this sort of thing also.. which made it easier to write, I guess...<BR/><BR/>MATT-MAN: that is left to your imagination on this one my friend<BR/><BR/>TRAVIS: Just a short character study - with no intention of it going any further....Bondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-84607114367624663202007-02-19T09:29:00.000-06:002007-02-19T09:29:00.000-06:00Just read it again - you could have made Steve a real sleeze and Becky a real slut. I don't see that here, which makes your characters more interesting.<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to seeing what the story becomes.Travishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-13839193154601355382007-02-19T09:09:00.000-06:002007-02-19T09:09:00.000-06:00Please tell me that there is a riding crop and ball gag involved!!Matt-Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01758200133537951854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-24083207992493969292007-02-19T08:51:00.000-06:002007-02-19T08:51:00.000-06:00MAGS: Glad you enjoyed the story...even though you are not that kind of girl... and sorry to say..that is all there is.Anndihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08703154815958841195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-45251862879356035272007-02-19T07:24:00.000-06:002007-02-19T07:24:00.000-06:00I know that people do this sort of thing-heck, I know PEOPLE who do this sort of thing...<BR/><BR/>But it still surprises me, and I always say to myself, "Who does this sort of thing?"<BR/><BR/>Guess I've never been that type of girl.<BR/><BR/>Great story so far!Magshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10202414026688355188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-63651405764004499812007-02-19T07:19:00.000-06:002007-02-19T07:19:00.000-06:00TRAVIS: Thanks<BR/><BR/>LIZZA: Glad you enjoyed it...it is an interesting game<BR/><BR/>PIA: LOL...yes, the interactions of a wedding .. interesting...<BR/>LOLOLOL could be ..possibly, but which parts?<BR/><BR/>ANNDI: Darn, thought I had it timed out right this time, guess you read too fast... LOL.... KISSESBondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-69402704393462332222007-02-19T06:37:00.000-06:002007-02-19T06:37:00.000-06:00Lizza's right.. and it's even better when the "mouse" turns into the "cat".<BR/><BR/>Excellent music Vince... too bad I had to turn Nat off to move on with the story though.<BR/><BR/>Blue Velvet.. *sigh*<BR/><BR/>Now about the Chicken Dance... *shivers*<BR/><BR/>Smooch!Anndihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08703154815958841195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-91192918331358965662007-02-19T06:29:00.000-06:002007-02-19T06:29:00.000-06:00As soon as I started reading, all I could think about were these lines from "Four Weddings and a Funeral":<BR/><BR/>Bernard: How's it going, Lyds?<BR/>Lydia: Bloody awful.<BR/>Bernard: Oh dear, what's the problem?<BR/>Lydia: I was promised sex. Everybody said it. You'll be a bridesmaid, you'll get sex, you'll be fighting 'em off. But not so much as a tongue in sight.<BR/>Bernard: Well, I mean, if you fancy anything, I could always...<BR/>Lydia: Oh, don't be ridiculous, Bernard. I'm not that desperate. <BR/><BR/>Now I have a BIG question: Is this story any way at all autobiographical???? BWAHAHAHA!!!!<BR/><BR/>Hugs,<BR/>PiaPiacerehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05548925703951188132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-84074047679061436192007-02-19T02:56:00.000-06:002007-02-19T02:56:00.000-06:00Good story, Bond. I like this perspective on the cat-and-mouse game that men and women play.<BR/><BR/>And the music is beautiful.Lizzahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02612798054079065399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-83802255186096457472007-02-19T01:08:00.000-06:002007-02-19T01:08:00.000-06:00Smooth.Travishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.com