tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post4945898233786457172..comments2007-03-11T15:14:32.490-05:00Vinny "Bond" Marinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-23529625055221996312007-02-08T21:35:00.000-06:002007-02-08T21:35:00.000-06:00Ultimate sign generator fun (also make comics, logos, banners, buttons, glitters, avatars, sigs, etc) found on<BR/><A HREF="http://www.customsigngenerator.com" REL="nofollow">CustomSignGenerator.com</A>!CoMeDy KiDhttp://www.comedysearchengine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-18620341370749329052007-02-05T19:19:00.000-06:002007-02-05T19:19:00.000-06:00Hm...Danahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03655542995797870719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-85730803432321046872007-02-05T18:24:00.000-06:002007-02-05T18:24:00.000-06:00OK this might just be my musician head talking but: It makes a HUGE difference when I can play your clip at the same time as read in terms of atmosphere.<br /><br />What is it?TopChamphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03377737494575644509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-1511448762650505812007-02-05T17:30:00.000-06:002007-02-05T17:30:00.000-06:00Yeah, what Trav said.<br /><br />Great details (again), my friend. Can't wait for the next installment.<br /><br />Love ya!Desert Songbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14320552900816326120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-2958341264857785502007-02-05T15:48:00.000-06:002007-02-05T15:48:00.000-06:00Hope to find a Part III to drift in, too! =) Great Matinee as always!Sannihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14377853790967916704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-21755006855124700172007-02-05T14:15:00.000-06:002007-02-05T14:15:00.000-06:00**Eats her hot dog and slurps on her diet Pepsi** Yummy! I'm really liking this story! Keep it comin'!Meribahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13744257308678493967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-48566165079433621472007-02-05T14:05:00.000-06:002007-02-05T14:05:00.000-06:00hi bond! bobby who? <br /><br />smiles, beeEmpress Bee (of the High Sea)http://www.blogger.com/profile/08300140506585000934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-63239232432285534072007-02-05T09:43:00.000-06:002007-02-05T09:43:00.000-06:00Oh wow, have I ever missed reading your stuff, Mr. Bond. This serial, well, I just have to ask: may I borrow it? You know I have this reluctant group of readers. I think they would adore it. For the sake of planning, I'd need to know a few little details ... in advance ... you're never going to go for this, are you? I'm serious, though, Vinny, I'd like to use it in my class. Let me know, ok?Cocohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02827325960865599740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-12115054380175480652007-02-05T08:53:00.000-06:002007-02-05T08:53:00.000-06:00The Vin-Meister is at it again. Will Bobby live to see another drink at The Rose?Matt-Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01758200133537951854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-81157699417906852672007-02-05T07:40:00.000-06:002007-02-05T07:40:00.000-06:00You know Trav has a particular knack for making the best comments first. This is really pulling me in as a reader V. And I am with Anndi --there'd better be a part three ;-)<br /><br />And thanks for stopping by mine--skeevies or no.<br /><br />SmoochTurnbabyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02112548452165588580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-12199126992840544492007-02-05T06:57:00.000-06:002007-02-05T06:57:00.000-06:00Hey darling, did you enjoy the Super Bowl? <br /><br />Looks like Bobby has gotten himself into one BIG mess, he'd better watch his back!<br /><br />Have a lovely day! <br />bisousTisha!http://www.blogger.com/profile/00476744443195395621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-79089421701030938412007-02-05T06:14:00.000-06:002007-02-05T06:14:00.000-06:00There better be a part 3 Mister!Anndihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08703154815958841195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-29256636492130005082007-02-05T01:00:00.000-06:002007-02-05T01:00:00.000-06:00Tension ratchets up nicely. There's an interesting underlying theme here about power.<br /><br />The long-haired tough guy has power over Alex. Alex takes his fear of that and turns it into power over Bobby. <br /><br />Bobby stumbles into power he doesn't want and can't handle.<br /><br />Sheesh...there I go over-analyzing again!! <br /><br />Good story V!!Travishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.com