tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post5102443982286304598..comments2007-03-28T13:00:05.719-05:00Vinny "Bond" Marinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-90638063738166226972007-03-28T12:50:00.000-05:002007-03-28T12:50:00.000-05:00Hello my friend. Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up.<BR/>Great story.<BR/>I love how it builds,and while the first two parts were great for background as well as story, the third installment was the best in my opinion. Good writing and suspense, and a conclusion that made sense but still was haunting. I liked how you tied Travis into it in the end.<BR/>Kudos.Morgenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16654573008006116939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-91332924385292331542007-03-27T18:13:00.000-05:002007-03-27T18:13:00.000-05:00short and sweet tonight - midterms, doncha know ... this one will haunt me for a while, Vinny. I'm glad I can come back and read it ... thanks, hon.Cocohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02827325960865599740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-72586795297847377942007-03-27T17:43:00.000-05:002007-03-27T17:43:00.000-05:00I believe it was Lee Ann who took the fall... or did she just go *poof*????? <BR/><BR/>Excellent story...Dixiechickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06124048258352596323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-29472346091185739182007-03-27T14:06:00.000-05:002007-03-27T14:06:00.000-05:00I thought it was a stand-alone. I've been back and read the other parts now. I quite liked that it started with a murder that became clear as the story continued.TopChamphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03377737494575644509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-59542282402739380162007-03-27T10:45:00.000-05:002007-03-27T10:45:00.000-05:00OOPS - re-read, and realized that it was only in my mind, but still - wow.Angellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07752214549343627320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-68039177459496202322007-03-26T19:36:00.000-05:002007-03-26T19:36:00.000-05:00TC: Glad you enjoyed...all of the stories are meant to be short- no more then three weeks as this one was..<BR/><BR/>SANNI: Glad you enjoyed the story and the popcorn<BR/><BR/>ANNDI: One of those points I decided to let the reader fill in on their own, so everyone reads a slightly different story<BR/>I know - I miss the music also... KISS<BR/><BR/>MERI: You and Angell both presumed it was mom...but it could have been Elizabeth...It was never stated definitively....<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the complimentBondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-26025273462677363252007-03-26T19:25:00.000-05:002007-03-26T19:25:00.000-05:00I kinda figured it would be the mom who took the fall, but I thought it would be a suicide. I was a little surprised to discover that Mary Alice actually pushed her over and wondered how she managed to lure her up there. A story about wanting to reconcile perhaps? Nice job.Meribahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13744257308678493967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-32291912018811301932007-03-26T18:34:00.000-05:002007-03-26T18:34:00.000-05:00I wonder... what triggered her trip back to Rogers Bay after all these years... hmmmmmmmmm...<BR/><BR/>Tragic.. very good Vince... very good.<BR/><BR/>You know what I miss don't you...<BR/><BR/>KissesAnndihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08703154815958841195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-67794094627233029342007-03-26T18:33:00.000-05:002007-03-26T18:33:00.000-05:00Well done, my friend! I so liked the ending... and the cheapest (salted) Popcorn ever! =)Sannihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14377853790967916704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-90156457424954382692007-03-26T18:23:00.000-05:002007-03-26T18:23:00.000-05:00Hey Bond - I think this is a great story - it was short but carried the tale keeping my interest right through to the conclusion. <BR/><BR/>I like it.TopChamphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03377737494575644509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-79020511091921189092007-03-26T13:23:00.000-05:002007-03-26T13:23:00.000-05:00MAGS: You know I am <I>always</I> looking for the chill factor<BR/><BR/>TURN: TY and thanks for the heads up on the one area i did not transition... The one thing I always knew is that the victim would not be revealed...that is for the reader to decide..was it mom? Was it Elizabeth? <BR/><BR/>SONGBIRD: TY - glad you enjoyed<BR/><BR/>108: I shall now blush<BR/><BR/>ANGELL: ummmm I never divulged that information....But glad you enjoyed it<BR/>Weekend was long and tiring.Bondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-70876385345520374302007-03-26T13:05:00.000-05:002007-03-26T13:05:00.000-05:00WOW - loved it. Nice ending. I love that we didn't know who was killed until the very end.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait for your new one next week....<BR/><BR/>How was the weekend?Angellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07752214549343627320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-32610543947298995652007-03-26T11:32:00.000-05:002007-03-26T11:32:00.000-05:00You are a storytelling genius, my friend :-)the108http://www.blogger.com/profile/06822287393601058364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-47122264691980527192007-03-26T11:20:00.000-05:002007-03-26T11:20:00.000-05:00Well written: suspenseful, mournful, intriguing, tragic.Desert Songbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14320552900816326120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-56113527985912397482007-03-26T07:44:00.000-05:002007-03-26T07:44:00.000-05:00Very nice Bondbaby--I particularly enjoyed you keeping the 'mystery' of who had met their demise going and I also like the 'payback' element for the 'Travis' character at the end. <BR/><BR/>I like the flow in this part very much.<BR/><BR/>SmoochTurnbabyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02112548452165588580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-51206006844226255372007-03-26T07:30:00.000-05:002007-03-26T07:30:00.000-05:00Chills....Magshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10202414026688355188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-15138294963974771242007-03-26T07:23:00.000-05:002007-03-26T07:23:00.000-05:00TRAVIS: thanks... glad you liked it<BR/><BR/>PIA: He became a male stripper and is now working the streets of Hollywood - bwahahahahahahahahaha<BR/><BR/>TY and SMOOCHBondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07033455144526676371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-7749900302419272462007-03-26T05:25:00.000-05:002007-03-26T05:25:00.000-05:00I wanna know whatever happened to Wayne Robins...<BR/><BR/>You DO weave a nice tale there, Mr. B!!!!<BR/><BR/>SMOOCH!<BR/>PiaPiacerehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05548925703951188132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24194846.post-81913163855720176642007-03-26T00:33:00.000-05:002007-03-26T00:33:00.000-05:00Sordid and sad, with a conclusion that makes sense.<BR/><BR/>Well done.Travishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.com